“The kitchen smelled good” is telling. “The kitchen smelled like cinnamon and warm butter” is showing — and it puts the reader right there in the room with you.
Word of the Day: DESCRIBE. To describe means to use words that help someone else see what you saw. Good writers use all five senses!
Five senses — five ways to describe!
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What is your favorite smell in wintertime?
What does winter sound like? Let’s make some winter sounds!
What is one food you only get to eat this time of year?
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See: twinkly lights. Hear: boots crunching. Smell: cookies baking. Taste: hot chocolate. Touch: a scratchy sweater. Those words put you right there!
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Sense detective! Close your eyes. What do you HEAR right now in this room? Name three things. Now open them — what do you SEE that you didn’t notice before?
Quote of the day: “If there’s a book you want to read… then you must write it.”
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Toni Morrison — one of the most celebrated American novelists ever. She won the Pulitzer Prize for Beloved and the Nobel Prize in Literature in 1993. She worked as a book editor while writing her own early novels, often in the hours before her children woke up.
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Morrison’s point applies to your own life: some stories only you can write — because only you were there. Writers make those moments land with concrete sensory detail.
Specific details are what make writing memorable.
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Why does the second version feel more real, even though “nice” is a perfectly good word?
Notice the showing version names a sound and a smell, not just a sight. Why do those senses hit harder?
What’s a story from your family that has never been written down?
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“Nice” tells the reader your conclusion. Details let the reader reach that conclusion themselves — which makes it theirs. Smell and sound land especially hard because they’re tied tightly to memory: a scent can bring back a whole room in an instant. Writers know this and use it deliberately.
Try it
Break assignment! Over the holidays, ask an adult in your family to tell you a story from when they were your age. Write down three sensory details from it — a smell, a sound, something they touched. Bring it back in January. You’ll be writing a book nobody else could write.
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